User:Approximately90/Marburg virus/Zingylynx Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Approximately90 and Hermiastudy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Approximately90/Marburg_virus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marburg virus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- Zingylynx: this edit is not to the lead section

Content

- Zingylynx: The content added is a relevant update to the prevention section of the article. The section in the article lacked detail and the edit brings in more recent information.

Tone and balance

- Zingylynx: The points brought up appear balanced and unbiased. The ideas of new vaccine and their efficacy along with the obstacle with which each treatment faces was equally represented.

Sources and References

- Most of the sources appear to be recent and the statements made in the edit were well cited throughout each paragraph

Organization

- Zingylynx: The article contains recent and accurate information that is backed up by a reasonable number of sources. Some of the phrasing could be more concise or benefit from terminology that is more official.

Images and Media

- Zingylynx: no images or media were added by this edit.

New Articles

-Zingylynx: this is an edit and not the draft of a new article.

Overall impression

-Zingylynx: This edit could benefit from more concise verbiage and less blanket terminology, the content itself is relevant and brings good information to the article.