User:April.k0ala/Ghulam Ali Khan/Melinasr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

April.k0ala


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ghulam Ali Khan


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ghulam Ali Khan

Lead

 * I think overall the lead is solid so I agree with not making any substantial changes. However, it might be beneficial to add in the artist's most famous work, if they have one.

Content

 * How will you be incorporating the information in the original article? I think its important to include information about The Delhi Palace & Dehli, especially if you want to include that photo.
 * There's a sentence in the career section that needs to be reviewed: "His artwork picturesque aesthetics and incorporated..."
 * I really love the "Painting members of the Mughal court" section! Very clear and informative

Tone and Balance

 * Great tone! Very consistent and it fits the Wikipedia tone.

Organization

 * I think it looks a little weird to have the three subsections under career since two of them are so small. Maybe remove the subheaders to make it look longer, or find more research? I think the content is great though.

Media

 * I like the inclusion of the The Diwan-i Khan in the palace in the Delhi Fort [Red Fort]! Do you plan to include the pictures used in the "Works" section in the original article? I think you could go without it, but also it would be cool if you found some way to incorporate more photos!

Overall Impressions

 * I really like how you've reworked it! I think there are some things from the original article that would be great additions to your draft, but I think what you have right now feels complete either way.