User:April.k0ala/Ghulam Ali Khan/Rizing153rose Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) April.Koala


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:April.k0ala/Ghulam Ali Khan


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ghulam Ali Khan

Evaluate the drafted changes
While the lead did have new information, I think some of the information in the new lead as better off in the content section because some of the sentences were a little too focused on the emperor who he served under rather than the actual artist.

The content was great! I like how you took me through how you took me through how he served under different people as the time changed. I noticed that the original article focuses a lot on his art rather than the context surrounding the art, so I think you did a good job filling in the gap.

Overall, for a draft I think the organization was great. I think it will be better to understand once you make a few edits.

I'm also happy to see that you added a lot of citations. Overall, great job!