User:AprilDiamond18/De-extinction/Pschiele Peer Review

General info
AprilDiamond18
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AprilDiamond18/De-extinction?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):De-extinction

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing your proposed changes, I have a few notes on how you can improve the contributions. One, grammatically there are some minor errors in sentence structure and spelling that are a quick fix and a boost to your credibility as a contributor. Two, after reviewing your sources, I noted a number of them came from news outlets such as the New York Times, which can show bias in their presentation of information, and as such, I would consider seeking out more academic sources of information regarding de-extinction and its history. And on that note, I found your contributions to be lacking in supporting citations, so seeking out sources to validate the added information would be a good idea. You did a good job remaining neutral in your presentation of the information, and so with these edits I believe you can provide a meaningful change to your article.