User:April Sala/Organizational behavior management/LaDonna205 Peer Review

General info
(April Sala)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:April%20Sala/Organizational_behavior_management?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(The lead section is brief and concise but it does not contain a overview of the article major sections. The content is neutral and add relavent to the topic. It appears as if there are some underrepresented population. I would include OBM in the private and public sector and distinguish between the settings. The content accurately  reflect cited sources. I would reorganize the structure of the article. I would summarize and combine the sections in the History to a more brief history of OBM. My overall impression is that it identifies relevant topic that adds value to the article. .)