User:Aprilfarrah10/Black maternal mortality in the United States/CerebroJR Peer Review

Content


 * The content is numerically relevant to the topic
 * The content is up to date from 2021- 2022
 * There does not appear to be content missing as it is a chart
 * It addresses the statistical data that comes from 3 different states showing how different population groups are different from one another.

Tone and Balance


 * The content is neutral
 * no
 * no
 * no, it just works to show the reality through the use of numerical values.

Sources and Resources


 * All backed up by government websites
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * yes as of 2021-2022
 * yes review written by a wide range of medical committees
 * I do not believe for this instance of the data used that there will be any better sources.

Overall


 * I feel that this chart helps add a good visual representation of what differences exist within black maternal mortality
 * provides a statistical and strong point of what variety of data influences and represents the mortality rates
 * add a sentence or two to update or change how the chart may be looked at so it is more impactful.

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)