User:Aprilfarrah10/Black maternal mortality in the United States/Dogsarefun123 Peer Review

General info
Aprilfarrah10
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Aprilfarrah10/Black maternal mortality in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black maternal mortality in the United States :

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead of the current article looks well-written overall and there is nothing you have to add to this. The lead to the data section you are editing explains what PRMR is.

Content: The content you are adding is up to date and seems correct since you have government data as your citations for each respective state. This information is relevant to the article because you are adding to gaps in the table where it previously says "data not available".

Tone and balance: The information added is extremely neutral considering it is data that does not have an opinion aspect to it.

Sources and references: The sources are all from government associations where data has been compiled into reports so it is reliable. The sources all seems to be recent and relevant to the topic of maternal mortality.

Organization: The content is very clear and well-organized because it is going directly into a table that is already present in the article.

Overall Impressions: I think you did a good job finding gaps in this current wikipedia article and then adding this new and updated data into the table. This makes the article more complete and easier for a reader to understand.