User:AquaticBanana/Draft:Blind Photography/Roamingtiger007 Peer Review

This is an interesting concept. Not a lot of people talk about the works of blind photographers, so thank you for highlighting this and providing more insight into the term/subject.

The introduction is clear, concise, and straight to the point. It does not over-explain and provides the perfect starting point for the rest of the article. Readers can know exactly what the topic will be on. Guiding wise, I would suggest that you move the ‘History’ section further up. If it is placed after the intro section, it would flow a lot better than leaving it until the end.

“Additionally, their work may aim to capture the daily life of foreign cultures. Like how people from Zambia re-make and recycle objects.” This sentence could be combined into one to make it more cohesive, by placing “for example” in there instead of saying “like.”

I was able to click through all of the sources cited and it navigated me to the sources with out any trouble, so good job on that!

If you’re able to find work of the mentioned photographers/artists, and it follows wiki:image use policies, then it would be nice to have those included. Images that included freely licensed, free of copyright, etc.

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