User:Arboyle/Organizational communication/Serrekunda62 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Arboyle)


 * Organizational communication
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Amanda,

I like your article of choice. I was surprise to see that an article as educational as Organizational communication would still need some tweaks. Thanks for the edits done on it by the way.

I was not sure if the first sentence of the lead is an original thought or it needs a citation and so does the first sentence on the History.

It looks like a lot of sections of the article require citations.

Aside from the references and citations, it was educational reading about Organizational communication.

I hope you find my suggestions helpful.

Thanks,

Sukai