User:Archeddar/The Women of Brewster Place (novel)/Audreyb07 Peer Review

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 * The Women of Brewster Place (novel)

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Lead: This section is very concise and gives a great summary of this novel. No confusing phrases and very easy to follow. Really nice job!

Plot Summary: this section provides a great summary of the novel. It is clearly detailed and easy to follow. Each short story is equally balanced for the most part and gives substantial information without being over detailed. Kept it all at a neutral, fact-stating point of view, while keeping it interesting to read at the same time! I appreciate how much you seemed to really read this novel thoroughly.

Characters: Each character in this section has an equal balance of information! The only thing I would have to say is that you repeated some information from the plot section, but I think it’s necessary in this case.

Analysis: I really appreciate how you gave examples of how Black Sisterhood is formed and displayed in this novel. It gives a better understanding to why some things happened the way they did in this novel and it allowed me to have a different perspective of why the novel may have been written. I also found it very interesting how this novel relates back to Hughes’ poem. It’s not completely balanced to the other sections, but I know you are still working on this section so I’m sure it will be then!

Musical Adaptation: I don’t think that this section is completed yet so I won’t make comments on it. I really appreciate you adding this section in.

Sources: I’m not sure if you added all of these sources since I’m reviewing from your sandbox, but great number of sources!!!