User:Ard1174/Northern flicker/Ajk1129 Peer Review

General info
Ard1174
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ard1174/Northern flicker - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Northern flicker - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The base article seems very full, and the additional information added is all good. Some extra sources would add variation and extra reliability to the information. The added changes all good, with a neutral tone and on topic writing. Check grammar and spelling in the last section of the opening.