User:Ard1174/Northern flicker/As2460 Peer Review

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ard1174
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ard1174/Northern flicker
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Northern flicker

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the in-depth information that you've added

You really went into lots of detail with all aspects of reproduction, and made it a really thorough piece

I would fix the lead to one sentence, and then put all the other names into a new section

the subspecies category is really confusing, you could probably reword it better for people.

red shafted group cafer, most recent info is from 2018 you could update it

maybe move the generic description before all the subspecies with specific descriptions

for the diet theres no reason the audobon should be quoted, it can easily be paraphrased and cited

influence of diet on offspring is only one source and its not cited

no citations in habitat

I think that this is a hard article to work with, but that you've done an incredible job with fixing the reproduction section.

I think for the rest of the article you will have to do some rearranging and citing, and maybe some more research for the red cafer. I feel that this is a good article and I learned a lot, so I personally don't know what more new info you could add, but if you can go for it!