User:Ard1228/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Peter Pan syndrome


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is in need of a better lead, It needs more accuracy, more information about what this syndrome is and how it affects the person personally and in their life. On the talk page someone noticed that there seemed to be similarities between the Peter Pan syndrome and with Pathological and Demand Avoidance. For this reason too it needs more information about the Peter Pan syndrome and maybe compare both the Syndrome and Pathological Demand Avoidance so that the readers can identify the differences between them both.Most claims in the article do have citations but I find that not all of them or 100% reliable, to be completed and a trustful article it needs many more information and reliable sources.


 * Sources
 * https://www.healthline.com/health/peter-pan-syndrome
 * https://www.betterhelp.com/advice/therapy/peter-pan-syndrome-the-science-behind-it-what-it-is-how-to-treat-it/
 * https://autismawarenesscentre.com/an-introduction-to-pathological-demand-avoidance-pda/
 * https://www.regain.us/advice/general/what-is-peter-pan-syndrome-and-how-do-i-overcome-it/ https://www.biography.com/news/michael-jackson-childhood-peter-pan-syndrome

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Construct (psychology)


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has been rated a start class article since It is still not completed and is in need of so much information. It starts with a pretty good lead informing us about what is a psychological construct but it was very brief and then it kept going with other topics of construct psychology. It’s all relevant information to construct psychology but it needs to provide more information for us to clearly understand more about it. The article has no citations and only provides us one source which means it’s not a notable article. For this to be a notable and completed article it needs more information, citations and reliable sources.


 * Sources
 * https://eiko-fried.com/new-paper-what-are-psychological-constructs/
 * https://study.com/academy/lesson/construct-validity-in-psychology-definition-examples-quiz.html
 * https://link.springer.com/chapter/10.1007%2F978-1-349-16464-6_4

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Hypnoanalysis


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article started with a good lead and it is very understandable but it mostly talks about what hypnoanalysis is and it’s use, which is good to know but it needs to embark more information about the topic. It explains what hypnoanalysis is and it’s use so now we need to learn about different ways that hypnoanalysis is performed and how they do it, if it has side effects or not, how useful could it be to someone and many more things. The article does provide good sources specifically to what it’s talking about but to be a completed article and needs many more information.


 * Sources
 * https://www.selfhypnosis.com/hypnoanalysis/ https://www.ruthallen.ie/aspects-of-hypnoanalysis/
 * https://britalarsoncounseling.com/what-can-hypnoanalysis-treat/

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