User:Ardelpaschal/Susan M. Hopkins/GabrielWeiss28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ardelpaschal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ardelpaschal/Susan_M._Hopkins?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Susan M. Hopkins

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Overall, the article is very well written and gives a strong detailed account of Susan M Hopkins life and context for role as an epigrapher in Dura Europos.

- Content definitely has strong primary secondary sources to back up its claims

- Perhaps I would add more images to the article of Hopkins herself? Or maybe pictures that show more examples of her work?