User:Areed99/Alligator Hole River/William parker4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Areed99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Alligator Hole River


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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There is only one sentence of information and a few references on the draft as of the time of my peer review. The only information provided is that the Alligator Hole River is a river in Jamaica. As such, it is difficult for me to provide feedback that is in-depth and complete. However, I would recommend that Areed99 completes the article with concise, clear information that allows the reader to gain genuine and accurate insight into the Alligator Hole River. I recommend adding sections to the article about general background, history, cultural significance, species that live in the river, and the value of the river to the communities it flows through as well as the Jamaica as a nation.