User:Areede/Viola Canady/Alicecarlst Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Areede


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Areede/Viola_Canady?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead is concise and relevant. There is an introductory sentence that summarizes the person written about.

Content: The content is relevant and appears up to date, although I think having one or two more sources would help with notability. The article does fill a content gap.

Sources: All of the sources appear to work.

General: Everything is neutral and relevant to the topic. There aren't over represented viewpoints but I think the article could be made longer by talking about her artwork. The citations are from reliable sources but I think there should be a separate citation for her working on the uniform for Douglas Macarthur. I'm not sure what is missing that should be added but the article is pretty short and I think if there is enough information it would be helpful to split the body into a few sections (for example: early career, daughters of dorcas and sons quilting guild, individual works etc.).