User:Aresiaarthurs/Visual communication/Acw055 Peer Review

General info
Aresiaarthurs
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Aresiaarthurs/Visual communication
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Visual communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
I appreciate the side by side of the original information and your edited version. I recommend elaborating and including additional information throughout the opening paragraph such as linking the mentioned mediums and including more examples as in the original opening.

The tone used is neutral and appropriate for Wikipedia as their standards require.