User:Aresiaarthurs/Visual communication/Cdh036 Peer Review

General info
Aresiaarthurs
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Aresiaarthurs/Visual communication
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Visual communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits to the article were made clear in the lead which made it easier to follow as I compared it to the original. I appreciated the break down of the paragraph being edited and the focus of the assignment. The format in which it was presented is consistent. The added sources provide citations that are indeed helpful for the article as Wikipedia suggests more citations from the original article. The edits are easily identified along with the formatting. The original article is well structured and your edits add more substance to the topic. The breakdown is effective and narrowing it down to specific paragraphs is key.