User:Areyes12/Positive youth development/IG270 Peer Review

General info
Areyes12
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Areyes12/Positive_youth_development?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Here are some suggestions to make your contribution clearer:

Clarify the introductory sentence: The first sentence is a bit complex. Try separating the ideas for better readability

Specify the factors: Make the factors more explicit in the first sentence to avoid being vague.

Improve grammatical structure and coherence: Some sentences are fragmented or confusing. Enhancing them will make the text more professional and easier to understand.

Since this is for a Wikipedia article, include references to studies or data that support statements about the effectiveness of PYD programs.