User:AriBerry501/Gay icon/Aleeexxxaaa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you review?
 * - AriBerry501


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AriBerry501/Gay_icon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * - Gay icon
 * - Gay icon

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I am not sure if you sources are trustworthy since GQ seems to be pop-culture, magazine oriented instead of peer-reviewed. You addition of Elton John and Lil Nas X are great choices! You also added great information about them. Now, for the other gay icons in the article, I was thinking maybe you could find some more information about Cher since she only has one sentence in the actual article. Also, for Lady Gaga, maybe include her song "Born this Way," that became super popular for the LGBTQ+ community and how it was inspired by a gay black activist. And for Ellen, you can talk about her show she had before her talk show that got cancelled for low views because people didn't want to watch it since she was an out gay person during that time when it wasn't so widely accepted.

You are doing great so far. You have clear, concise detailing and it is a good start for what can come from your article.