User:Ariamaji/Registry of Interpreters for the Deaf/Camacphee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Ariamaji
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ariamaji/Registry_of_Interpreters_for_the_Deaf?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Registry of Interpreters for the Deaf

Evaluate the drafted changes
The revision of the lead section is well done, relevant and current. The original included unnecessary and unsubstantiated claims about the original RID's founder. The new lead is concise, balanced and well written.

The article isn't finished at the time of this review, and has original parts of the lead still needing to be removed, but is otherwise much more clearly organized compared to the original.

It looks like all links are working.