User:Arianamarievasquez/Psychosis/FormallyTrainedHomunculus Peer Review

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Arianamarievasquez
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


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Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I noticed the change to the actual article you made, so I'll try to base my feedback on that. Your edit has a good start to it, and I might recommend adding a bit more than trailing evidence to the article. Something that helps readers a lot on Wikipedia is things that provide evidence and add to the cohesion of an article rather than a series of facts about a topic. That being said, I think your addition is sourced properly and is relevant to the section it is in, and it would be a great place to expand upon other negative symptoms, as that seems to be an area that the article needs more content and improvement in. Zooming in on specific areas that need more information could help you get more information in such a big article without getting too overwhelmed.