User:Arianna.fr/Computer and network surveillance/Rcahill25 Peer Review

Peer Review for Computer and network surveillance - Rcahill25

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Arianna.fr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Talk:Computer and network surveillance

Evaluated review/suggested changes
All of the reference links provided are accessible, however what could cause some concern is all of them come from webpages that end in .com, although you can use these types of sites it may be more difficult to determine if they are reliable since some of the information provided could lead to personal opinion rather than factual which can conflict with the Wikipedia guidelines. The information provided to the Talk page relates to the topic and is balanced in a well manner. Maybe adding bullet points to help further the viewpoints you found could help improve the overall lack of information the Wiki article has. You write “monitor unusual activity so they can later investigate suspicious activity” adding what kind of suspicious activity they tend to find the most or what is the hardest to track down could be a factor to help improve the article as well. You could also add what ways individuals can protect their personal information from getting leaked and hacked. Scrolling through the article I noticed it lacked on discussing digital footprint and what it is, you mentioned briefly what can lead to it but by adding more information on it could help the readers understand the concept of it more. Overall the information you provided to the Talk page will improve the Computer and Network Surveillance article with its main points, adding some more information about the digital footprint would help and possibly finding references that come from a journal or textbook from a database could help with expanding your further research.

Rcahill25 (talk) 04:05, 25 October 2021 (UTC)