User:Ariannagiannini/Media bias/HunterWWW Peer Review

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 * Arianna Giannini
 * Media bias

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * So I could not find any edits that you have made to the article - I may have just missed them, I am still a but rough with navigating wikipedia. I took a look at the article you are doing though, and it is a very lengthy one. Media bias as a topic is pretty broad, so if you are haven't already, I would suggest that you narrow your focus a bit to a specific part in this article, or choose a different, less crowded article discussing the subject. If you want to stick with this one, though, I have a few areas that seem like they could use some beefing up. For starters, the section on "confirmation bias" looks to be a bit weak, and is relatively early on in the article. This could be a great place to start, because the fact that it is so early on means readers will likely use this section to decide whether or not they want to continue reading the rest of the article or not.
 * Another place the article seems to be lacking a bit is the "National and ethnic viewpoint" section. I know our training modules told us to not dive head on into topics that could be considered controversial, because they can be hard to cover accurately and thoroughly, so if you want to skip this one it makes sense. I do think that the discussion of bias based on ethnicity/country is an important one, though, and the fact that this article is lacking in substance when it comes to this area is a bit concerning.
 * The rest of the article looks pretty solid to me. I think this one might be a little tough just because of how much is already here, but the topic is a good one. I would suggest starting off with the weaker elements of the article that I mentioned and seeing if you can find more sources to add to them, and go from there.