User:Ariellarose19/Elderly care/Aksgpp3131 Peer Review

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Ariellarose19
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 * User:Ariellarose19/Elderly care
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added is well-written as it contains relevant information, and addresses critical issues in elder care. One thing that could potentially be added to the text is more global perspectives on elder care. It also could benefit more by exploring different issues faced by elderly individuals, for example, racial, ethnic and cultural issues.

The tone of the text is generally neutral and focused on presenting the issue and the text does not seem biased. The content is informative without it being persuasive. The content is also backed up by reliable sources. There are no grammar issues or spelling mistakes. Overall, this section makes a great addition to the article, highlighting key challenges in elder care.