User:Arjinroe/Little Simz/Niolzc Peer Review

General info
(Arjinroe)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Little Simz
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

More information in Artistry and Personal life.

The structure of Artistry second paragraph is weird.


 * 1) The informations are pretty confuse and divisive. Some information in there doesn't feel right under this category.
 * 2) Content is too divisive.