User:Arjunverma 28/Childhood/Zainilkhanmahorvani Peer Review

The article is very good it also consist of different age group of children which suffered from the factors of where they lived such as in developing or developed country is also being described propely.in the starting it provided the important aspect of the child marriage which is the big issue even though it is being banned by the law.it give a good detailed aspect of how WHO organization are trying to minimize the malnutrition faced by the kids faced war or poverty and starvation as well.

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