User:ArloOkem/Lazo Marsh-North East Comox Wildlife Management Area/Notjenna2001 Peer Review

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I really like the inclusion of indigenous history of the island! Mentioning the territory belongs originally to the K'omoks people provides important cultural background information. The information regarding endemic species and the environmental management perspective added to this article are also very well written and include lots of relevant facts. The wildlife section is very well written and flows very well, as well as including important information about the fauna of the area. the article covers at least 5 of the points provided by Dr. Little.

I would love to know more about the indigenous history is possible. Adding components about when indigenous people lived here, why they left, and when they left, can help fill in gaps about the areas history. The article flows well and is easy to understand, very accessible for a variety of audiences. the article is clearly organized and it is easy to tell what each section is about. However, having history earlier in the structure could help introduce the reader to a place more thoroughly before getting to environmental and geographical details. The tone is neutral and professional throughout.

There are adequate sources throughout the article. The work is balanced and subjects get an equal footing in the article. Great job overall! the article is informative and succinct.