User:Armaanismail/Renewable energy in Asia/BriGonz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Armaanismail


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Armaanismail/Renewable_energy_in_Asia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Renewable energy in Asia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

- The updated lead section does reflect the changes made and new content

- Lead is concise and clearly states the article’s topic

Content:

- The information you've contributed is relevant and up to date

- To improve this article, you could cite more of the critical information

Tone and Balance:

- Your contribution and the article, in general, maintains a neutral tone

- There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented, great job

- The content is neutral, and therefore there is no persuasion

Sources and References:

- Contributions are backed up by reliable secondary sources

- Content accurately reflect what the sources say

- Links do work

Organization:

- Well written and organized

- No necessary changes to grammar. I did not spot any grammatical errors

- Content is divided into sections and is easy to read