User:Armaanismail/Tajikistan and the World Bank/BriGonz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Armaanismail


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Armaanismail/Tajikistan_and_the_World_Bank?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tajikistan and the World Bank

Evaluate the drafted changes
The section you've written does a good job introducing the information you added in the body of the article. There were a few grammatical errors. I corrected those and published the changes. I'm unsure if I was supposed to make the changes myself... refer to the edit history to view the changes.

Is it possible to include information on economic and monetary policies to enhance development and encourage private investments? Suppose you decide to have more about the economic and financial policies. In that case, it may be easier to understand how the steps are supposed to be achieved if there are any policies intended to do so. This would also improve your article. This is considering the role of the government in implementing policies that would essentially enhance the effects of the $1.4 billion World Bank investment.

You did a great job of adding relevant content, but there is a lack of citations.

I think your contributions will improve the existing article. A notable strength is an elaboration on the history of investment efforts and specifics of the sectors that investment is intended to address.

No evident biases, the article remains neutral.