User:Arobeah/sandbox

From Dr. Hildebrandt: Great job, Alexa! Keep up with it.

SA #17:

 * 1) I chose George Huang (Law & Order: Special Victims Unit) - Wikipedia. I chose this article because I really like that show and I am familiar to the character.
 * 2) On the talk page, it says it is rated Start-Class
 * 3) The article needs more titled sections; there is only the first section and one sub section titled "Notable episodes." The main section contains specifics about a couple of episodes that are important, but they aren't in the "Notable episodes" section. Other sub sections that could be added is certain seasons so important episodes of his can be entered into those specific season sections. One things mentioned is that he doesn't appear in 16 but he comes back in season 17. Why is this. The answer can be in terms of the show and what the character left to do.
 * 4) In the first source, there are 2 hyperlinks. The first one takes me to a sketchy website and the second one takes me to the NBC website, which is a good source except it says that there is a problem with the page. The second and third source are just episodes of the show with the hyperlink of a Wikipedia article for the show itself.
 * 5) Other articles show that this article is missing things like character development on him and his relationships with other characters on the show. It also lacks information about his personality as a character. The article does, however, inform what his entails and how he interacts with the other characters.

SA 18:

 * 1) Lava (2014 film) - Wikipedia
 * 2) The One at the Beach - Wikipedia
 * 3) Family Affair (Grey's Anatomy) - Wikipedia

SA 19:

 * 1) Lava (2014 film)
 * 2) The guide that will work for this article if the Film guide. This is because it is a 2014 short film. I can used published articles, however I cant use any sources from IMDB, advertisements, or Rotten Tomatoes.
 * 3) The article is missing information about the animator that created it. It is also missing the publics reactions. It is also missing the casting.
 * 4) Calia, M. (2015, Jun 26). ARENA --- movies & books -- the initial attractions: 'lava': Pixar shorts: A farm system for storytellers. Wall Street Journal Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/arena-movies-amp-books-initial-attractions-lava/docview/1691212428/se-2?accountid=13886

SA 20:

 * 1) Crawford, T. (2014, Sep 13). Lava, a volcano full of love: Animator jim murphy directs first film, part of TIFF short cuts. Toronto Star Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/lava-volcano-full-love/docview/1563990550/se-2?accountid=13886
 * 2) 5 pixar shorts that inspired 'lava'. (2015, Jun 25). Dow Jones Institutional News Retrieved from https://www-proquest-com.libproxy.siue.edu/wire-feeds/5-pixar-shorts-that-inspired-lava/docview/2065117828/se-2?accountid=13886
 * 3) Taylor, D. (2015, Jun 21). Second chance: Sonoma animator james murphy turned down an opportunity to work on 'toy story' but got another shot with 'lava,' which opened saturday. The Press Democrat Retrieved from https://www-proquest-com.libproxy.siue.edu/newspapers/second-chance/docview/1690472307/se-2?accountid=13886 \

SA 21:
I couldn't find any good sources for either of the 2 other Start class articles I chose. So I found another start class article that I could find good sources for:

Bambi (character) - Wikipedia


 * 1) Lutts Bambi 1992 - Evergreen State College. (n.d.). Retrieved June 24, 2022, from https://sites.evergreen.edu/anthrozoology/wp-content/uploads/sites/142/2015/11/Lutts-Bambi-1992.pdf
 * 2) Wright, David. “The Original Bambi: The Story of a Life in the Forest.” Library Journal, vol. 147, no. 5, May 2022, pp. 87–88. EBSCOhost, https://search-ebscohost-com.libproxy.siue.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=156688819&site=ehost-live&scope=site.

SA 22:
Lava (2014 film) - Wikipedia

I would like to add:

 * 1) Lava is unique in that it lacks any verbal communication other than the song.
 * 2) * ARENA --- Movies & Books -- The Initial Attractions: 'Lava': Pixar Shorts: A Farm System for Storytellers - ProQuest
 * 3) Shortly before the film production had begun, Murphy went back to Hawaii in order to "reconnect emotionally" with the land that sprung his inspiration.
 * 4) * Lava, a volcano full of love: Animator Jim Murphy directs first film, part of TIFF Short Cuts - ProQuest
 * 5) Under the section Reception, I want to create a sub section called Critical Response on top of the 2 reviews already there.
 * 6) Then under the Reception section, add a section titled Accolades.
 * 7) In the Accolades section want to add that the short film appeared at both the Telluride and Hiroshima film festivals.
 * 8) * Lava, a volcano full of love: Animator Jim Murphy directs first film, part of TIFF Short Cuts - ProQuest
 * 9) The production of the film took an entire year and required a 100-person crew
 * 10) * Second Chance: Sonoma animator James Murphy turned down an opportunity to work on 'Toy Story' but got another shot with 'Lava,' which opened Saturday - ProQuest (siue.edu)

* These are just a few changes/additions I would like to make the the Wikipedia article.