User:Aroddy1/Sex and drugs/Cjames2020 Peer Review

Hi!

I think you did a good job adding edits in a way that flowed with the original author's writing style. In some areas you mention "some studies show..." and I would actually be specific and list the year that the study was published so that the readers can see how "recent" the research actually is. I also wanted to ask why did you want to remove the sections from the original article: antidepressants, date rape drugs, amphetamines, and the two sections under society and culture? I think some of those enhanced the understanding of the topic and would be important to add back in and keep on the page. For example, the data on effects of antidepressants may be important and the effects of amphetamines because sometimes people are prescribed these medications and are unaware of how they impair sexual functioning. I would consider bringing some of these points back.

-Cyana

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