User:Arojas251/User:Ljasoncsusb2/Sula Bermúdez-Silverman/Arojas251 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ljasoncsusb2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ljasoncsusb2/Sula Bermúdez-Silverman

Lead
I would suggest adding more general information about the artist. For example, when and where she was born, mediums she prefers working in and other basic info.

Content
Add more content about the artists career where or how she started as well as education career. The rest of the content seems to just be listed without much explanation, go into depth about what you’re listing.

Tone and Balance
A neutral tone has been established within the information listed.

Sources and References
My only critique on references and resources is to simply do more digging and find more useful information to incorporate within your article.

Organization
Work on separating into subtitles that make more sense and that flow into each other and not jump around. I had previously mentioned that some of your information just appears to be just be listed with no guidance as to what the information listed represents.