User:Arojas251/User:Ljasoncsusb2/Sula Bermúdez-Silverman/Caitmarie12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ljasoncsusb2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ljasoncsusb2/Sula Bermúdez-Silverman


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Ljasoncsusb2/Sula Bermúdez-Silverman

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall you have good information, although there isn't much. I would find whatever other relevant information you can on your artist and add it to your article. A big thing I feel is missing is a clear separation of information, especially in the artworks and exhibitions section. I suggest including the years and locations of exhibitions and years of artworks if possible. You could add in any awards or grants the artist has received if they have received any. A few more citations and in-text references or wiki-references would be a good idea too, and will help connect your artist to other wiki articles. One minor thing would be to only put the artist's name in bold in the introduction paragraph, rather than the entire first two sentences. You could also say what mediums she focuses in, and maybe one of her most well-known artworks that people may know her by. You don't have any information on her early life (her birth place, birth date, family, etc.) which would always be nice to see if you have that information. You mentioned her education and that she graduated from Yale, but you didn't mention what she majored in/studied. Overall it is a nice article, but needs more information and organization/separation! You're doing great though!