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Article Evaluation
Rape culture

1. Everything in this article, specifically the prevalence section, is relevant to the article topic of rape culture. There are no opinions that your distract a reader from the topic of the article. This article is very neutral because it gives no opinions just statistics of rape culture. 2. There is one viewpoint of the idea that men are always the aggressors in rape culture, which can be argued. So this article sections underrepresented that aspect. 3. The source links in this article, do work, but just bring me to another wikipedia page. With this being he case it can be hard to see if the link supports the claims because I would have to go to the linked site and then see if there is another link, in order to find the original. 4. The information is pretty much up to date, given one statistic was in 2015 so it was only 3 years ago.

Edit 1
Drug-facilitated sexual assault 1. In the section "Victims" there isn't a lot of information about victims. I would add more information about male and female victims of drug-facilitated sexual assault and show the statistics between male and females. 2. Another area I would want to change, is to add a citation in the section "overdose dangers". This section has no citation after the information given so it could be seen unreliable. Also, I would give a a some more information about the effects of overdosing on drugs. 3. In the section "Prosecution and Punishment" I would adda citation of some statistics of how many cases are actually prosecuted. Also, this section needs a little more information about why DFSA is so hard to find the perpetrators and prosecute the crime.

Talk
Drug-facilitated sexual assault I think that this page in specific the section "victims" there isn't encyclopedic talk, more like a step by step instructions of what a victim should do when it happens to them. SO I think that it should be changed to a less advice like paragraph and more of what needs to be done.

Actual edit
Drug-facilitated sexual assault

Prosecution and Punishment
In the state of Connecticut, drug facilitated sexual assault is considered rape, therefore the offender will be charged, if found guilty, with sexual assault in the fist degree which is a class B felony. However, if the victim is under the age of 16 years of age then the offender will be charged with a class A felony.