User:Ars010/Skateboarding at the 2020 Summer Olympics/Jaycelyons Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ARS010


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * n/a
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Skateboarding at the 2020 Summer Olympics

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the article overall has a really good idea but as of right now does not seem to go anywhere. It simply states what countries participated in the skateboarding events at the 2020 summer olympics and who received medals. There is very little information that extends the knowledge past who participated. Being someone who knows nothing about skateboarding I would love to see more information on how the event takes place or what the athlete is supposed to do in order to possibly win gold in this event. Just simply going more in depth in everything to do with skateboarding in the Olympics rather than just sticking to the outcome of the 2020 Summer Olympics would make this article something worth reading.