User:ArtHistorianStudent/Interior of a Gothic Church by Paul Vredeman de Vries/Dismurrt Peer Review

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ArtHistorianStudent
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:ArtHistorianStudent/Interior of a Gothic Church by Paul Vredeman de Vries
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Overall, you explain your topic in a concise and understandable manner. Moving forward, I may actually remove some of the information specifically regarding the artist and his father. While it is important to understanding the artist and his work, I believe some of the information may serve better in the Wikipedia article specifically about the artist himself. Other than this, you do a very good job clearly citing your sources. One more small change, I additionally may switch your information where it is now to the article body, rather than the lead. Other than these small changes, your work is looking very good thus far.