User:ArtT38k/Mosque lamp/Sophia MacDonald Peer Review

General info
ArtT38k
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ArtT38k/Mosque_lamp?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mosque_lamp

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Overall the lead is pretty strong! The original article was a little unspecific with the overview. Giving a brief overview of other topics discussed definitely help make this a little easier to read and comprehend.

Article body

I think this area is a good start but I also think it would be good to continue on with this topic a little more. There is a large quote present which helps show where in the Quran is being referenced. With such a large quote being used there should be a little more explanation in order to help those who are unfamiliar with Islamic text.

References

At first glance, references seem to be in order. The sixth reference was not loading on my end but that could also be an issue with my software. All other references look to be cited properly and from reliable sources.

Overall, this article is off to a great start and is doing a good job at supplying the information necessary in a neutral tone.