User:Articles0405/Typhus/Recordplayer88 Peer Review

General info
Articles0405
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Articles0405/Typhus?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Typhus

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this draft is nicely organized and overall well written. I think it was a very good idea to expand upon the prevention of Typhus as well as create an individual section about the method of diagnosis for Typhus.

I think another section you could further expand upon would be about the treatment of Typhus. I find that typically there are some research or medical journals available on sites such as JSTOR about the treatment of diseases. For example, the New England Journal of Medicine has a paper on the treatment of Scrub Typhus. Using other laboratory sources outside of the CDC may allow you to get some more specific information or statistics relating to your edits. You could likely find news articles about the current typhus statistics both globally and concentrated on the U.S.

There are some minor grammatical issues that could very easily be fixed for the final draft. Overall very good edits that were easy to read and healthily contributed to the wiki-article.