User:Artlessbarnacle/sandbox

Extraterrestial Atmosphere
The page has a good description of specific atmospheres, but not so much how they can be (or were) observed, especially for exoplanets. It could use an extra section on that and more citations in the exoplanetary descriptions.

Absorption spectroscopy
This page is weakly developed in the "applications" section> It is missing citations and is underdeveloped.

Anti-greenhouse effect
This article is heavily underdeveloped. It's talk page has not been updated in over a year. Although it is low-importance, it could be valuable to develop as a form of developing theories about exoplanetary atmospheres.

content
"perfectly aligned from the astronomers' vantage point"- perfectly is vague, considering the method works as long as the planet is within a range of inclination angles

"The probability of a planetary orbital plane being directly on the line-of-sight"- again, the wording is a little confusing

i wish it was broken down into more subsections. In the history subsection, there are too many details about kepler, since it has its own wiki page anyway. Info about the end of kepler and beginning of tess should be added

tone
there are not concerns with the tone

talk page
there is no talk about transits

content
the content seems okay but it is not cited so there is no certainty

tone
there are not concerns with the tone

talk
the talk mentions a valid point that the article should be planetary geology. there are also a lot of concerns with the grouping of information and potentially branching off into new articles

history
poppies were used as a medicinal plant for their high success as a pain reliever. thanks to the high demand of its medicinal and recreational use, processed poppy made ts way around the world as early as 3400BC along the silk road. The presence of the poppy flower can be traced all the way to Egyptians in 1550-1292 BC, where juglets resembling poppy seed pods have been discovered with trace amounts of opium and the flower appeared in jewelry and on art pieces.

geopolitical influence
betrayal

Multiple meetings in the early 1900's addressed the need for restricting cultivation of poppies, including:


 * Convention for Limiting the Manufacture and Regulating the Distribution of Narcotic Drugs
 * International Opium Convention
 * Shanghai meeting of the International Opium Commission

According to Evered, the American war on drugs influenced the Turks significantly in the 1970's, when a ban was put in place and resulted in a negative popular opinion of the U.S. among the Turkish people, which reflects in the present political climate, where only 18% or the turkish population has a favorable view of the U.S. as of 2017.

sumerian

formatting
'medicinal uses' and 'other uses' need to be subcategories of 'uses'