User:Artsenic17/Childbirth/Habdulbaki Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Artsenic17, MS2random, 00ik00


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Childbirth


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I agree with the removal of non-cited information and information that is not sufficiently supported by existing literature for postpartum hemorrhage. I also agree with the inclusion of more information regarding respiratory distress syndrome and labor induction due to their high prevalence. Making these edits more accessible to the average reader would make them even more impactful through the use of less medical jargon and accompanying it with explanations of diseases like RDS and medication effects.