User:Artsenic17/Childbirth/Pardeep8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

00ik00, Artsenic17, MS2random


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Childbirth


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childbirth

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it is very important to utilize credible information when reporting statistics and prevalence of disease to the public, so I am glad you were able to edit the sourceless information and provide new, verified information to supplement the paragraph. Also, I agree with the suggestion to adjust the language and terminology used to allow for the information to be more digestible for anyone who may be reading. This allows for greater equity in the dissemination of health information. Another suggestion for an edit might be to add more information to the multiple births sections, particularly in relation to the unique risks and complications. I think risks from the parental and fetal side can be addressed (ex. TTTS).

Overall, I think the edits that have been made have been relevant, neutral, and of high quality.