User:ArturoV29/Giant kangaroo rat/Camillemarie222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ArturoV29 (provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ArturoV29/Giant kangaroo rat


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Giant kangaroo rat

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead paragraph is a great addition considering the article only has one sentence in that section. The information on why and how the Kangaroo rats habitat is being destroyed could be an important addition. As well as what research effort is happening to help the species.

The article body gives good research studies that are being done on the Kangaroo rat. There are som grammatical errors in these paragraphs though which is understandable for a draft. There could be more information given from these studies and this information could be given its own section such as "current research", because it doesn't seem to fit under the habitat section which already has a lot of information.

The resources look good more than three would be better considering if more was added to the research methods of the species.