User:Arvisujt/Federation of Cuban Women/Hannah Florez Peer Review

General info
Omeeezy, Arvisujt
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Arvisujt/Federation of Cuban Women
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Federation of Cuban Women:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Is there a strong opening sentence or phrase?

→ Yes, since they are doing additions to the existing wikipedia page the headings that they added all include strong opening sentences.

Is there sufficient attention to the larger historical, cultural, or geographic context?

→ Yes, there is sufficient attention to the larger cultural context in their additions.

Is there a broad framing of the topic and attention to other related Wikipedia pages?

→ Yes, their additions include a broad framing of the FMC.

Is there a strong organization and structure of the wiki?

→ Yes, the wikipedia has a strong structure and organization.

Are there a range of substantive and high-quality sources?

→ No, the additions include no sources at all.

Do these sources work well together to illuminate a topic in compelling ways?

→ No use of any sources in the additions, need to add some to illuminate the topic.

Is there any biased language?

→ No, there is no use of any biased language.

Any feedback on grammar and style?

→ Good grammar and style!

Is the language clear, accessible, and impartial?

→ Yes, the language is clear and accessible, as well as impartial.

Are there visual materials?

→ Yes, but the photo was in the existing article. Could include a photo or two in the additions.

Any other suggestions?

→ Overall, the article and the additions are very well done! They flow nicely together and fit in with the existing article. The only suggestion I have is to add sources! There should be at least one or two per paragraph depending on the length. Other than the sources, very well done!