User:Aryaft1/Born-digital/Jsteve17 Peer Review

General info
Aryaft1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aryaft1/Born-digital?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Born-digital

Evaluate the drafted changes
As of time of entry to Aryaft1's sandbox for this article, there is nothing added or any drafts for changes or moderation. I also found no mentions of this user making edits in the "talk" function. In editing this article, I would suggest that Aryaft1 find some more up to date and relevant sources as those in the article are from pre-pandemic years mostly.

I would also recommend that Aryaft1 double check some of the images as I'm not sure some of them are able to be used legally on Wikipedia and work to maybe make the original article less wordy. Some areas of the original article also appear to have the writer's emotions and personal opinions, which should be edited to make it more neutral in tone.