User:Asassdaw/Football in China/Xiannvzah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Asassdaw
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Asassdaw/Football_in_China?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Football in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
The writer adds an additional section titled "The "Golden" Era of Chinese Super League" to the original article. The explanation gives detailed data and information related to the incidents. All facts are reflected with a neutral tone and are cited with specific references. The writer did not include any personal opinions related to the incidents. The references are relatively reliable as they are mainly published by authorities and have dates and writers given. The sources are current and up to date. There are no images added.

Overall, I believe this additional section is a very significant incident that should be mentioned in the article. The writer clearly explained the incident and the social-economic consequences related to this event. The languages are neutral and balanced. The citations and references are current and thorough.