User:AsavariS/Restoration ecology/Emaddox2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AsavariS


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AsavariS/Restoration_ecology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Restoration ecology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is overall very descriptive and does a good job of explaining what the article contains. The definition of what Restoration Ecology is also well constructed, however the quote from E.O. Wilson does not have a date, and the need for the quote is somewhat questionable. An area that could do with more information is the section on restoration in American. The article seems really developed already and hopefully some of these suggestions can help you to develop it more.