User:Asb0910/Early-onset Alzheimer's disease/Mgmswim Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Asb0910
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Asb0910/Early-onset Alzheimer's disease

Lead evaluation

 * The lead is very concise and easy to follow. I like the changes made. It makes it easier to read and follow.

Content evaluation

 * The content is relevant and up to date. Flows well.
 * Maybe start editing the History section of the article. I think there could be more added to that section.
 * Find some more epidemiological findings to the section to enhance

Tone and balance evaluation

 * Content is neutral
 * Gives reader a clear reading and understanding of the epidemiology

Sources and references evaluation

 * Sources are present and cited correctly
 * I like all the sources used
 * Easier for those to understand who don't know a lot about Alzheimer's or familiar with medical terminology.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Organization evaluation

 * I like how the article is broken up
 * There might be another section you could add to broaden the topic and understanding, unsure of what though
 * Don't see any grammatical errors

Images and media evaluation

 * No images added

Overall evaluation

 * I like how you added different sources
 * I would add more to the section that you edited. Is very similar to the original page
 * Keep up the good work!