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Article evaluation
My article was on the Shamu (SeaWorld show) This was an informative article about the killer whale show at sea world. The just listed the shows throughout the years and also some of the incidents. Some these shows were educational and the others were just performance based. I am glad that they did go over the incidents that took place at seas world with the killer whales. That being said I do wish that they had gone over the husbandry and treatment of the whales. All of the links work and they were all neutral. The article is rated low importance. It is part of four projects. I will add a link to the article

Shamu (SeaWorld show)

Here is a list of potential articles
César Milstein

Carlos Finlay

Bernardo Houssay

These articles of Latino scientist that do not have information on their Wikipedia. I will I could add and make them better

Exercise 4
Milstein attended the Universities of Buenos Aires (Ph.D., 1957) and Cambridge (Ph.D., 1960) and was on the staff of the National Institute of Microbiology in Buenos Aires (1957–63). Thereafter he was a member of the Medical Research Council Laboratory of Molecular Biology, Cambridge, England, and held dual Argentine and British citizenship.

reference section

[1 https://www.britannica.com/biography/Cesar-Milstein ]

Peer Review
Hey there! Overall it seems like you have a really great start on your article! You are developing great content and I like the way you have clearly organized the article. The only suggestion I'd offer is to buff up the wording to have more cohesive sentences. Right now your sentences are wordy. For example, "Milstein died early on 24 March 2002 in Cambridge, England at age 74 as a result of a heart condition from which he had suffered for many years," could be changed to, "At the age of 74, Milstein died early morning, 24 March 2002 in Cambridge, England as a result of a long-standing heart condition." I realize this came from the existing article, but these are just thoughts! Good luck and can't wait to see what you develop! - User:Laurelleighgonzales