User:Aserota2/Monika Schleier-smith/Zgleason3 Peer Review

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Aserota2
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 * Monika Schleier-Smith:
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The writing is clear and flows well and all the links work. Capitalize Science News. Consider adding a photo.